In Class Writing

Why did I follow Steven and Rachel? Why did I have to be a follower and not a leader? Look where it got me. On a calm Friday night I'm stuck in this creepy wooden shed hiding for my life. I don't even know who the dude in the white hockey mask was. He was huge though. I hope Steven and Rachel are alright in the beach house. As soon as that masked guy sliced Mr. Paterson open with that machete, we ran. We just thought it was some older guy dressed up for Halloween. Mr. Paterson was being a pain in the ass acting like he owned the neighborhood. Considering on one liked him, I guess he had it coming. But never have I ever seen anything like that. The masked guy had such immense  power. He cut through Mr. Paterson like a hot knife through butter. Steven and Rachel saw the very end result but that was enough to spook all of us.